All Comments on 'The Ghastly Girlfriend'

by Mostodd07

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AxelottoAxelottoover 5 years ago
And no-one of value was lost

Mick would have damned Grace (or Andrew) to that place just so he could go free.

No loss to leave him there...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Just a thought...

Or two. So, does he ever manage to get out? And who did Xavier release? Well done,BTW!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Maybe in three years’ time he will learn.

His selfishness got him there. His desperate selfishness almost got him out. Perhaps he shall lose that internal nemesis when he serves his penance.

Wildspur55Wildspur55over 5 years ago
Fantastic and we'll thought out.

Great Story. A wonderful tale of love and lust.

FreedomBaseFreedomBaseover 5 years ago
What a Narrative !

You really know how to weave a fable into greatness. I'm impressed. You've left yourself plenty of room to start this legend way back in Rip Van Winkle times. Thank You.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 5 years ago

A fitting end for an a**hole!! Just desserts and all that. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

But how was Gina trapped there?

And she certainly had no problem damning Mick either. I wonder whether it was just Xavier leading him there, or whether his boss was also in on it and wanted to get rid off him without having to pay out the bonus.

Lots of things simply don't make sense in this story, or strains SoD too hard.

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