All Comments on 'The Gift'

A sex story it was good, so I'll take that, thanks.

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Original, well written, sexy, happy ending. All of the great ingredients for a great story. Please keep up the good work!

out so I almost quit when the husband sent her away for gangbangs. But the rest was so good as idea and the writing too that it is really one kind of a story.

Tooooo LONG--total B.S.--You are a tramp--slut--skank--whore--the end

Far too much narrative. Utilize more dialogue to tell your story. Makes for a much better read. In addition... you badly need an editor. There were far too many errors.

really original

i almost stopped mid way through, what an understanding husband, i'd have just divorced her befor i'd set up something like that. i can understand her needs but it wouldn't be fun to wait at home while she's acting like a slut doing 3 men at a time. of course he set it all up for her, better man than me. loved the ending, she wasn't turned into a whore, was able to fix his problem and that's all she wanted. very sweet.

Your typical husband can't get it up and the wife needs it. However the husband sends her somewhere to get it. Also gets the cure for his problem. The end.

Don't read unless you need to wack off to it.

HA

It's a lovely loving story with a new, unique premise. Thanks.

really this turns your crank...really gotta be a chick writer to be this faggie

Infantile nonsense.

Keep writing and let anonymous, who never wrote a story, roast in self adulation. Keep writing!!!

I kept hoping it would get better, but it never did.

and the spelling and grammatical errors were horrible. a mixing bowel? really?

Have these two never heard of implants? I got one when I started having problems and it worked wonders. made my little three and a half into a 7 incher and my wife thinks I am another man is really happy. I t works folks!!!

Not necessary to talk about fake tits, detracted from story

I want to throw up. Sorry .

Next time I need ipecac, I'll just read this drivel. Much simpler.

Nice . I loved it . And they all lived happily ever after .

The authors wrote a story about love that sacrifices itself for the good a another, and winds up being rewarded for true love.

5/5 Unfortunately, from my perspective such gross adultery grossed me out and I could not enjoy the well-written account.

Should have expected it, it fits with most of the style on the site and is why I try to find a few true Romances. My search parameters failed.