All Comments on 'The Gift of Goodness'

A littler slow to start but boy did it pick up. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Most excellent. I like the style.. people in love, humor and sex. A great early morning read. Enjoyed it so much that it seemed too short. Hope you will continue the story.

Great start . . . hope for more. Maybe other effects from his semen to come?

I too would like to see more of this story. The concept is intriguing, the main character is perceptive and funny, and the auxiliary characters are interesting. I know that you don't usually write follow-ons, but please consider adding to this one. You owe these characters at least one more public turn.

Isaac