All Comments on 'The Girl from Nepal Ch. 11'

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barbarajricebarbarajriceabout 15 years ago
Great Ending.

I really love this story and I hope you will continue it. Maybe with Aleja's story or even continuing Bas and Jagati's. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great!!

Omg did i ever like the story! i really liked the attraction between the two main characters and loved the sex. However, I was extremely disappointed with the ending. Nothing was wrong with it but I was continually waiting for the talk between Bas and his "mate" and the explanation. Since you didn't write the explanation, i felt jiped of all the background of the home planet and the ritual and everything...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great

Really liked that story

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