by SolarRay
The tone is perfect, and evokes exactly the genre and era you noted at the top.
Thanks Anonymous! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it and appreciated the inspiration. Thank you for taking the time to give it a read and comment!
Thanks! I wasn't sure how it would play in this category, mainly because I do not typically work within it, but I'm grateful for those who gave it a chance and gave it a read. Thanks so much for the kind comment!
What an amazing story... and so well written. SolarRay, thank you for writing this, it was breathtaking!
Amazingly well weitten. I salute your creativeness and your imagination.
What a wonderfully written tale! Loved every minute of it; including the chilling ending, and the despair in the closing words.