All Comments on 'The Girl In Flat 89'

Beter if you were to go more slowly.

It is a bit rushed. But very good story!! Will definitely be reading more of your submissions!

Great story. Could have been longer. Keep them coming.

There's no relationship between the two, we have no idea what these two women are like.... For the love of God, please read Colleen Thomas on how to write erotica for women. Cause this isn't it.

That seems like it could have been so much more than a simple tryst!

I really enjoyed it though!

Thank you!

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The pace of the story was good for me. The peek-a-boo tryst happened over several weeks and the ending was cute. I hope we get to read more about these two soon

That made me gush. I'm so fucking wet. Please write more.

Great story. Made for a great intro if you did continue

I loved this one too. You are the master (mistress?) of the short, very erotic, story!

I seriously wish this was me. I wanna be the older women having some hot sexy young woman desire me and set me up to be together. I loved this story

A very sexy story.