All Comments on 'The Girl in the Mirror'

Just wanted to say the comment may show I gave this a bad rating this was not my intention I was going to scroll downward on my pad and my finger slipped and gave a Great Story a piss pore rating and it won't let me change it. But let me make it clear this story is a 5 STAR STORY and if you know darkoverlord6's work as well as I do you know he would never disappoint as a writer. Again sorry man my finger slipped you deserve good rating for this new adddition. Anyway to you darkoverlord and all you literotica readers out there have a safe holiday!!Again,for me, 5 Star Story!!!

I hope there are more chapters in the wings, this one was pretty good. I'm sure many of us would like to see how the relationship develops!

What happens next?

Enjoyed it immensely... but then that’s generally the case for your stories. Would love to follow Joe and Marta farther, but I think you ended it well. 5*

I seldom comment stories here, but this one was special! I really loved it, it made for a change...

Thanks for your effort!

K

DO6,

Whatever you write, makes me want to read more.

Although written to a plausible end, I feel this one needs much more to come.

If it ends as is, so be it.

If there is more, great!

5*****s!

Burning Love

You're library is pretty stacked. Really enjoyed this one. Keep writing and spreading joy.

I don't have any comments or criticisms other than to say I love your writing and this story is right up there with the best of them. Would that I had half of your ability. 5*

Really enjoyed your story and your writing style is excellent. I was going to suggest a sequel but will leave that up to you and perhaps my imagination.

Thanks for the effort

The story flowed well and was well written. Maybe we will hear more about Crazy Joe

I love your stories and this is one of your best. Thanks

Your writing is always impressive and this story was right up there with your best. Thank you.

One of the best stories I've read in quite some time. I really loved it. 6/5 stars!

Keep writing!

That was spectacular writing and a very enjoyable read.

He’s one of my favorite oldies, along with Janice Joplin and, of course, the Beetles. These days, I listen to Bianca and Katie Perry.

Thanks to everyone for all the nice comments. It means a lot to me to know that so many folks are enjoying my work.

You’ve hit the best note a writer can get: everyone wants more of what is undoubtedly a one/off tale.

Loved every minute of it - and I’m glad I can conclude the story in MY imagination.

Thank you.

be nice for a follow up on Joe & Marta. read most of your stories. a tutor for Sam would be great.

Short stories make great film adaptations. This one has some nice set-pieces built right in. In the final scene, I was dreading some reversal, right when Joe had finally put his life back in line with his heart. If some problem occurs between Joe and Marta, you have the perfect plot-turn to drive the drama in a new direction. Like other reviewers, I, too would love to see future chapters. Joe and Marta have the chemistry to carry it through. Bravo!

How come there is no mention of Marta's dad or Bonnie's husband,if she was married?.Also how can Tessa spend all those hours away from her kids.?

there was talk about Marta's dad being a 1 time thing. Marta said the sperm donor being long gone before she was born.

This story touched my heart. There was, briefly, a Bonnie in my life. When she passed away 5 years ago, my wife of (now) nearly 40 years declined to go to the funeral. She showed her true character by holding me close for over an hour when I came home in tears. Thank you.

Very enjoyable story, with a touch of sadness and the light of hope.

Very well written and touching story.

Well this is a good beginning of a story... Too bad there is not a middle and an ending... Still, a 4 Star effort.

Remarkedly well written

I seriously hoping there's more coming

Fantastic writing. Great story, and well balanced. The kind of writing that leaves the reader with their own thoughts of what happened next! Congratulations.

5* this might be your favorite story I have read. It echoes "It" to me in a way but without the darkness of Stephen king's heart.

A great story, a chance of a fuller life with a reincarnated Bonnie. Well done!

This writer and the half-baked endings

Awesome story. Takes an ole guy back !

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Top Shelf!

11/10 Fender Stratocasters!!!!!

I sit here, listening to the last of "Who's Next". The albumn played in the background while I read this story. Sometimes singing along, harmonizing the way an old fart does remembering when...

Yeah, tears too.

I remember choices made. No time left to try the alternate path now. But even not having another chance ain't too bad. At least I didn't choose the path of gold above all other pursuits.

But the music is still within my soul, even if I never had your MC's talent.