All Comments on 'The Girl in the Red Cloak Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great chapter

I am so excited for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Loved it!!!!!!

Moooooore

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
I agree!

I see this going in a positive direction. Maybe the war will end and the two will get together. They DO care for each other deeply.

Anxious to continue the reading!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I got a feeling he's the Princess' brother or some Royal....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Updaaaaate!!!! :)

Hungry for more!

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 9 years ago
sweet little story.

Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
This was such a great story!

I followed this when it was first coming out, please continue, it was amazing!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excited to go on this quest with them! Thank you for sharing your writing talents with us

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 2 years ago

So, long ago and far away, I had a romantic tryst with a young lady who I'll call Reen. I was married to a selfish abusive woman who actually succeeded in driving me to cheat on her. (After I kicked her to the curb and remarried, I had no problems being totally faithful to my second wife.) But back to Reen, we were alone in the back seat of my car, naked and romantically involved. She gave me head for a little while and I returned the favor making her have multiple orgasms. She begged me to take her and asked me what I was waiting for. And just like Lukas, I told her that I didn't want our first time together to be in the back of a car, but in a nice bed with clean sheets because it was my intention to make love, not just fuck. I wanted us to fall asleep in each other's arms afterwards and bind our souls together. ❤ Lukas speech to Clara reminded me of that moment.

Reading this, I'm beginning to wonder if Lukas isn't Kasimira's little brother or a cousin. 🤔 I really think that he's more important than he's letting on. 5/5

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