All Comments on 'The Grand Strategy Ch. 01'

Great start to the series, keep it coming out regularly and you will build a following as this story had a touch of "this could really happen".

I agree with previous comment. Kep it (and the gang) cumming. Am looking forward to another 5 or more chapters.

saw all your recent submissions. Noticed the steady improvement, leading to this most recent story which I thought deserved 5 stars. Looking forward to further installments with other members of the club and their mothers. I imaging a grand finale with all parties at one time. But however you write it you're off to a great start!

The gang should have a party and fuck their their moms

This was a good start to a potentially great story! I hope there is a nice build up between the mother and son before anything happens as that'll make it more intense. I'm looking forward to more.

Nice start but no incest. Thinking and planning does not qualify. Hopefully you will add some in next chapter

Can't wait for the next chapter.

He is going to have his mother in the sack

I am 44 year old and after reading the story I started feeling for my own son. Give me some tips how can I pursue to my baby boy. Waiting for some tips for a mother in your next installment. Grt story by far.

Getting really exciting.

Please continue. Something about this story struck me.

Very good and Hot start. Five stars.

I just finished the 13th chapter and this is a great, well paced story. It's like a multi-course meal. There's a lot of delicious dishes before the main course is served.

It's also a slow-burn story that doesn't take weeks to read! It's a real jem. I loved it, Andididit! Great work

Very well descriptive and nicely written story. Gang of boys thinking about their moms in sexual ways and sharing their thoughts. Separated from each other dur to college and stuff but still sometimes connected with each other. Bill is a lucky guy who got Carol like hot MILF, his friends hot and beautiful mother.

How many guys get this chance to fuck best friends beautiful mother behind his back.

Congratulations for this excellent story!!! Great dialogs and amazing step by step advance! ;)

Already looking forward to the next chapters. That's a HOTTTT beginning!!!!!

Wow what a well written story! You're quite the talent and I look forward to reading the other things you've written.

complete and utter crap