by andididit
Your character development and story pacing is outstanding.
I just wish these last few chapters were a touch longer.
The character development and the pacing is outstanding. A masterful work.
I only wish the chapters were a bit longer.
The pacing of this story is amazing! I love how it's slowly building up. I can't wait for more!
What a hot chemistry between son and mom when dad is present in home. 5 star rating.