by andididit
Why don’t you tease your readers by having a chapter -or four- about the other sons and their mothers. Btw, your structure and grammar are very good - are you a professional?
A perfect ending to really turn on the heat, the excited expectation of what is to come on Monday ripped through my body.
Now to the final boss. About other boys, I actually don't care a bit about them,maybe they each can have their own series. But naturally not all of them can get with all of the women, so involving them will only distract from the focus of the story. The feel of the story may get ruined and it may stray from the discovery of Bill's love for his own mom other than lust through help from his friends' mother. Anyway eagerly waiting for the next part
Enough with the dramatic tension. Let them consummate already. Let them enjoy their joyous incest, and then start again about grandchildren. It is time for the sex to begin.
Now it is Monday...
Let's see some action!!!
A very loving Mother and son story. Oh my, incest waiting to happen.
I'm having issues with his loving father right there, and the fathers Son, and Wife is going to Cockold him. It's different when dear old dad is a bastard, or messing with a younger woman, or dead. This just seems wrong.
I love long stories, but disappointed when I discover each chapter is only one page.
I love these long son seduction of mother stories. I loved the discussion of the female incremental decision making.