All Comments on '"The Great Dark Man"'

It was like you were trying to fit every teen boys vulgar word for vagina...quim? Snatch? Ewwww...

You have a point about 'snatch', but I stand by 'quim'!

At least I didn't use 'minge', 'fanny', 'beaver' or 'clunge'.

I did use 'gash' though, which I think was a mistake in retrospect.

I loved it! Looking forward to part 2. I'd like to see a bit more forcefulness from the male character. Loved the use of the word 'daddy' in there. And quim was a good choice of word ;)

It was a great story and I just loved it. The writing style was also fine.

The story is very good please make a sequel on it

Good story overall, but yeah, that is DEFINITELY rape. It isn't good that she didn't know that.

Non con stories are the only genre I read. I do love when the non con is not violent or gratuitously mean and cruel. (A good writer understands just the act of unwilling fornication, sticking a cock into a cunt is violent by the very nature of the act.) Please continue to write. Would love more non con from you.

If you don't like non con read something else.