All Comments on 'The Halloween Haunted House Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Haunted Houses are not allowed to touch people... legal issues. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
oh for

oh for fuck sake did you think this was based on a true story? "haunted houses cant touch people" really? try this is a story written for erotic enjoyment you putz

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I'm pretty sure that was a joke comment... Anyway, liked the story!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
Very nice story

Sweet sex between a mom and her son, even though it was instigated by a ghost, it was still hot to read.

How about telling us what happened after they got home.

Thanks for the read

Daniel5421Daniel5421over 12 years ago
Great

You have to make more but first make another chapter of the looking glass

ChrispeChrispeover 12 years ago
Very erotic.

That was a very erotic story. Thank you.

harry186harry186over 9 years ago

Fantastic story idea.....next chapter please. And also make sure the next chapter when mom takes her son she feels more taboo....like make her say oh honey this is so wrong. We should not do this and stuff with a mix of emotions. #just a suggestion. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very good!

you write more of this.. Make more stories of spirits taking over mom and son or Dad Daughter, family. Thanks keep it up..

leespikedleespikedover 3 years ago
right up there, Bob

I still come back to re-read these stories... I hope you're doing well, Bob,

you should be making money at this

talented writer, thank you!!!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a11 months ago

I do not uually read "ghost stories". Howeber, this one was an excellent read. If not for the ghost, mother and son would never know the depth and breadth of their love for each other. It is apparent mother and son never really talked nor accept the other as more than a mother and son. I can only imagine the surprise the mother felt when she realized that her son was a man who truly loved and cared for her as a woman. Hopefully the subsequent chapters will continue to explore the new more filling life of Trish and Justin.

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