All Comments on 'The Hands'

Please note that as of the 3rd of April, 2005, you are reading an updated version of this story.

SN

SN, You are still the most amazing writer in Lit. This revision was nothing short of brilliant. I knew you had done well when I had to ummm...umm.... take a "reading break" halfway through. Truly amazing, Sir. Can't wait for more of your writing!

pony

This has to be one of the most erotic stories I have read on Literotica. I would love to see the story continued untill the end of her reeducation so to speak.

This in incredible, I'm in awe! Even moreso because I've actually had this fantasy! omg, I think I love you, or at least your talented hands ;) Please continue using them to write like this. Superlative!

Sir Nathan...you wicked, wicked man!!! What an evil sense of lust....yummy!!!

Barbarian Queen

Always hot, and you just get hotter! Good work!

-- Bitch

One of the best stories ive ever read and stunning that it doesn't rate over 4.5 and have a red H. Has it been bombed or something? lit can remove those you nkow. At the end of this i was wanting more and more but tjen thought wait a minute, no, this is perfect and i read it again. It was even better the secomd time around. ive bookmarked this one sir. Original scary and fucking HOT god imagine that

s xxx

WOW...that is all I can say. Another amazing story from an amazing writer.

in the Alfred Hitchcock dark fabric trademark of ever building suspense. Add to that Sir Nathan's ability to pen dominative intense erotica and what do you have? A bone chilling and libido thrilling story that I consider one of the author's finest writes. You have outdone Yourself with this revision, SN <smile>

VERY impressed Vixxx

SN,

At first, I was thinking I wouldnt like it, but as I read on, panties were soaked..I kept reading and breathing heavier and heavier..and repeating OMG OMG OMG....I was wiggling in my chair.....You are a true erotica story teller!! **kisss

with the man gone to iraq...a girl needs a little extra at night. your stories fill that prescription nicely, keep up the good work. I like that you can be just as twisted as I want to be.

As a fan of Literotica for over five years I find it amazing I've never stumbled across any of your writings before. This was one of the most incredible stories I've had the pleasure of enjoying here at this site. Your use of the language is nothing short of superlative. The sexual aspects of the story left me breathless and aching at my core. You've definitely gained a new fan with this brilliant piece of yourself. I can't wait to read more... (apparently I can't leave a signed comment, so know this comment comes from findy of fs and GD)

God, this story was hot! I couldn't even make it to the end without cumming. Please write more like it!

and left me wondering what was going to happen next to the poor girl. A true 'fucktoy'was she!

Your command of the English language is stellar..that's why I gave you any points at all. This story was too scary for me and the total lack of concern for the fucktoy made me want to barf. Supposedly she is supposed to forget what has happened.....but she has flashbacks during the attacks. What will happen when she is released? I think she will remember. I kept thinking the "hands" must be from Mars or something. What they were was humans with no humanity. I guess a lot of people like that. Leighlilly

Oh thank you, I was looking all over for a story that involves electricity, and that properly describes it. You did that and so much more. Ahh, I could totally put myself in the shoes of that fucktoy. I don't think I'd need the drugs to climax, though. Lol. ;)

I loved it keep it up

my mouth was dry as i was reading this...

Reading this made me want the same done to me...

Mmmm...this is wonderful. I do wish I could read more of your stories. :) They're sooo delicious.

I wasn't sure I would enjoy this story, when I first started reading...But I enjoyed it, very much! Your writing is exquisite! I look forward to reading all of what you've written, Sir.

Is there going to be more chapters?

I wasn't sure I would enjoy the story, but I simply could not tear my eyes away from it.

Reminded me of a Japanese porn video I'd watched once. Very enjoyable. Thank you.

A story about sick perverts who can't get a woman the normal way.

to believe that this was written by the author of Den of Iniquity.

The opinions expressed at the end of that story were so valid.

This was pure shit though.

I guess some one hi-jacked this authors identity.

Thank you for bringing this to us in a such beautifully crafted work of art

Fucking great. :) It may be written years ago, but I can't stop reading your stories.

I can't get enough of your stories

It reminds me of black mirror s02e02 white bear in which the woman's memory is wiped over and over again.

Great job,

the steady increase of her predicament until she is turned into a mindless animal, the once intelligent, strong, confident woman turned into a mindless fuck-toy. A fuck-toy unable to tell the difference between pain and pleasure, craving both. Her swollen dripping pussy is the new command center of her mushy brain. And even when they send her home, back to her normal life, the fuck-toy will stay imprinted deeply in the back of her mind. Always there, reminding her what she truly is, what she truly craves.

Thx for writing that inspiring story, a true piece of art.

HOT