All Comments on 'The Happy Family - The Contest'

Very good story . I hope that there will be many more chapters .

I was scanning the list of new stories and when I saw your name I knew I had a winner. I expected a great incest story and now I'm itching for a continuation of an open-ended story that hits almost all the categories I love. You and your editor (yourself or someone else) should be proud of your work. One of the best.

Another great story, I always enjoy your writing. Thank You!!!

im not real fond of the swingers lifestyle but it was a good story none the less. i enjoyed it, keep writing please!

EXCELLENT!!! . . . You write well and always keep it interesting without sliding off into something bizzare!! Please keep up the good work and please get on with the next part of the story - Your kink always sounds natural & believable!!!

The story is superb. Only the role of Lars and Jenna parents- Jason and Lena is a bit short. Would be more enchanting if both of them would also be drawn in the sexual exploits.

Great work, as always!

great story, you should definatly keep this storyline going!!!

I rarely read any story more than 4 pages, and haven't written anything longer than 3 pages, but dammed if I could stop reading all the way thru page 9, hungry for more!

My only bone to pick (pun intended) is that when Lars is holding her upside down during the contest, it's virtually impossible for her tongue to reach his balls.

other than that though, extremely hott story

Just want to say this story was great!

I'd love to see the parents ambush the kids in Chapter 2!

The few paragraphs you gave us about them were such a TEASE!

Lars needs to learn what it is like from ma and pa!

Good and fun story, both entertaining and hot. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. ^__^

I loved it ! Like all of your stories, but love the ones in this category. I only hope the characters move on to anal and excessvie ass to mouth. That would make a great contest. Please continue writing.

Excellent, loved it...

Wicked story!

Without a doubt the best story i have ever read on here...can't wait for another one!!

Please now part two with Lena and Jason and Jana and Lars all together.

Oh, how wonderful. Thank you!

Which there’d be more stories with Jana and Lars.

This is crazy good, from star to finish. Hot characters and great set ups for other story lines. Hope you come back to this one

Not bad . Keep them coming.