by Boxlicker101
....without tension or conflict this is just a slightly long jerk story of which there are more than enough being pumped out every day.So what is gained here?
I really enjoyed this story. It didn't have the usual hatred and foreboding plot line that some of the hatred and foreboding plot line that some of the other loving wives stories have.
OK, it's nice, well-written -- but improbable. As someone else said, no tension, no emotion; jejune description all the way through.
PPPete nailed it. Seduction? "Come back and fuck me!" Save the time - don't even mention Halloween.
With her Hubby in jail, her status as 'wife' is minimal or less. Hubby is irrelevant insofar as the story goes, so it is MUCH more Erotic Coupling than LW!
The sex is adequately described. (Damning with faint praise!) Ywo flawless bodies having sex. Sure! Give our Vixen a small mole on her left shoulder! Then have Hubby lick it!
3* Very Vanilla!
What a beautiful story! It's always wonderful when two married people get together for sex and begin an exciting affair! Happy fucking guys!