All Comments on 'The Hard Choice'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Did i miss somthing?

Just a little confused on the story plot.

odogwuodogwuover 5 years ago
Weird.

Can't seem to understand what was happening.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
eh...

I'm relatively sure I followed you, but it was pretty awkward. Unnecessarily so.

2 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not hard to understand, angles of death preying on the unfaithfull , jimwho chicago

That about it. 2

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 5 years ago
4 stars

But how could anyone sentence someone to death and not feel guilty? What kind of sociopath is she?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

kind of a hard story to swallow i can't believe a picture could result in murder where is the plot here and is there more or do you leave us hanging what happens to greg or his wife

tazz317tazz317over 5 years ago
WHO LOVES WHO THE MOST

yet what are they willing to sacrifice, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
5 stars

Liked it, but not sure it works as well as it should.on a site like literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved it but more horror than erotica

This story probably doesn't belong on this site. I think as a horror story it's clever and is something Clive Barker would do. Over the head of most of the reader's here who just want to wank off and not think.

ErotFanErotFanabout 5 years ago
Great story!

It would have worked perfectly in one of the Halloween challenge submittals.

P.S. We all knew the bitch would pick, didn't we. Did she ever figure out that the next time the pictures would be Taylor and HER!

ErotFanErotFanabout 5 years ago
Great story!

It would have worked perfectly in one of the Halloween challenge submittals.

P.S. We all knew the bitch would pick, didn't we. Did she ever figure out that the next time the pictures would be Taylor and HER!

silentsoundsilentsoundabout 5 years ago
Pure evil.

5* for twisty erotic horror.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What a bunch of nonsens!

They fuck with strangers?! And thats three times without investigating who or why they came??!! Unbelievable and therefore only laughable! And a slut who willingly sacrifices her husband is not only a whore she isnt wearth to be a human!!! But thats your fantasy so be it!!

mower9527mower9527about 4 years ago

i would like to see a sequel to this story.

someoneothersomeoneotherabout 4 years ago
Just weird

Nothing in this story makes sense, but then this is pure fiction.

Raleighman53Raleighman53almost 4 years ago

No surprise on the ending. Good story.

Rolando1225Rolando1225over 3 years ago

Nice and original story about a succubus and incubus. I guess the moral is that there is a reaction to any action... even sexual ones. Keep writing.

NitpicNitpicover 3 years ago
What

What on earth was this crap about.?

mrfox_stingermrfox_stingeralmost 3 years ago

Sad. The love is on sided. He resisted. She didn't

NitpicNitpicalmost 2 years ago
What

What on earth was this about?.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That is really fucked up. Original … but fucked up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Interesting but only 3* because it's Unfinished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Odd

HighBrowHighBrow10 months ago

Quirky, weird, dark Femdom agitprop without explanation.

OdessaLesOdessaLes6 months ago

Just don’t get it ?

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