by hotprof1973
I'm relatively sure I followed you, but it was pretty awkward. Unnecessarily so.
2 stars.
That about it. 2
But how could anyone sentence someone to death and not feel guilty? What kind of sociopath is she?
kind of a hard story to swallow i can't believe a picture could result in murder where is the plot here and is there more or do you leave us hanging what happens to greg or his wife
Liked it, but not sure it works as well as it should.on a site like literotica.
This story probably doesn't belong on this site. I think as a horror story it's clever and is something Clive Barker would do. Over the head of most of the reader's here who just want to wank off and not think.
It would have worked perfectly in one of the Halloween challenge submittals.
P.S. We all knew the bitch would pick, didn't we. Did she ever figure out that the next time the pictures would be Taylor and HER!
It would have worked perfectly in one of the Halloween challenge submittals.
P.S. We all knew the bitch would pick, didn't we. Did she ever figure out that the next time the pictures would be Taylor and HER!
They fuck with strangers?! And thats three times without investigating who or why they came??!! Unbelievable and therefore only laughable! And a slut who willingly sacrifices her husband is not only a whore she isnt wearth to be a human!!! But thats your fantasy so be it!!
Nothing in this story makes sense, but then this is pure fiction.
Nice and original story about a succubus and incubus. I guess the moral is that there is a reaction to any action... even sexual ones. Keep writing.