All Comments on 'The Hard On'

by Sexybeast8899

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lc69hunterlc69hunter10 months ago

Playing with friends

shadrachtshadracht10 months ago

Ridiculous, but super hot. Great story.

Lawrence8675309Lawrence867530910 months ago

Great story. Very sexy.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

OK premise.

Sex much too fast. Too automatic. Too mechanical. No tension.

No foreplay.

No dialog about the kind of sex each really likes/doesn't like.

Three stars.

zephyerzephyer10 months ago

I liked it! Now write of story of the spouses that stayed behind in the hotel having a threesome while the other three were at the beach.

Maybe another story when the three come back from the beach and catching the three in bed together and it turns into an orgy. Everyone swapping spouses.

DentalFlossTycoonDentalFlossTycoon10 months ago

I liked it for the most part but he can’t have an erection on the beach but fucking is alright. I agree with Zephyer that I expected the spouses to be faking sick to cheat together

ILHUBBYILHUBBY9 months ago

Nice story and miss you on X

dick_hardendick_harden22 days ago

It was going great until you put the cop into the story. I would have liked a different way for you to get them to fuck

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