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Click hereIn the hazy aftermath of their intense passion, as the three of them lay entangled in each other's arms, the mood shifted to a lighter and more playful one. Amelia's voice carried a mischievous undertone as she murmured, "So, did you just impregnate your sisters, Paul?" Her words were laced with a hint of humor, a reflection of the shared intimacy they had experienced.
Isabella, her cheeks flushed with both satisfaction and a touch of embarrassment, offered her own confession. "Well, I might already be pregnant." Her words caused Amelia's jaw to drop in surprise, her eyes widening as she looked at her sister in astonishment. But the moment quickly shifted as she pulled Isabella into a hug, a grin stretching across her face.
"When did that happen?" Amelia asked, a mixture of surprise and amusement in her voice.
Isabella's blush deepened as she explained, "About a month ago, the first time Paul and I made love in the tent. I figured I might as well experience everything my first time..."
Amelia burst into giggles, unable to contain her laughter at her sister's boldness. "You little slut!" she exclaimed with a playful nudge, a sense of camaraderie and sisterly affection shining through her words. The tension of the moment had dissipated, replaced by a shared understanding and acceptance of their unique bond and the passionate choices they had made together.
As the night grew deeper, the lovemates found themselves nestled in each other's arms, their bodies intertwined in a warm and comforting embrace. There was a sense of tranquility and contentment that enveloped them, a silent understanding of the bond they had forged through their shared experiences. The soft murmurs of affection and the gentle caresses exchanged in the darkness spoke volumes about the depth of their connection.
When morning arrived, Chani took the lead once again, rising with a sense of purpose that radiated through her very being. As the first rays of sunlight filtered into the cave, she stood before the gathered sietches, her voice strong and commanding. With pride in her eyes, she proclaimed Paul as the Maur'dik, the chief of chiefs, the one who embodied the unity and strength of the Fremen people.
Amidst cheers and cries of approval, Chani continued, her words carrying a sense of hope and determination. She announced the unification of the Sietches, the coming together of the Fremen under the leadership of their new Maur'dik. The lovemates stood together, a united front that symbolized the harmony they had achieved and the powerful force they now represented.
In the months that followed, guided by Paul's visionary leadership and the unwavering support of Chani, Amelia, and Isabella, the Fremen rose as a formidable force. They united under a common purpose, driving the Harkonnen oppressors from the sacred sands of Arrakis. With the power of the melange and their unwavering determination, they forged a new empire, one that embodied the strength and resilience of the Fremen.
Together, as the Imperial Harem of Arrakis, Paul, Chani, Amelia, and Isabella became symbols of unity and strength. They stood as pillars of wisdom, leading their people into a future where the Fremen culture flourished and the empire they created became a beacon of hope and prosperity for all who dwell on the desert planet.
Their love and devotion, intertwined with their leadership, shaped the destiny of Arrakis and laid the foundation for a new era of peace, prosperity, and harmony. The bond between the four lovemates of the Imperial Harem became a legend whispered among the Fremen, a testament to the power of love and the unyielding spirit of the desert warriors.
- COMMENTS
notseen8 months agoAuthor@Newt0351, it must have really thrown you when Daniel Craig took over as James Bond! =)
Anyway, the change is intentional. This story is a retelling by design, in a tradition as old as Shakespeare (who famously stole all his plots and characters), to animated Disney movies (which retold the Brothers Grimm, who themselves retold ancient folklore, and which Disney itself is now retelling *again* with live action). Changing hair color was intended to signal that -- "be warned: this story is familiar, but also different." Sorry it didn't work for you, but this story (which it sounds like you didn't read) is built on two central ideas: the sacredness of water to the Fremen, and Paul as the Fremen chosen one. I disagree that I could retell this story in another place and time.
Newt03519 months agoAs someone very acquainted with Frank Herberts' works I can't finish the first page. If you had placed this in the Dune universe and said it had happened hundreds of years earlier and used different names, then I would have read this and give you stars based on your work. Saying you are using the Atreides movie to Dune, giving Paul sisters (OMG it's a totally different story here), and not even giving Paul the right hair color. Pauls' description and his mother and fathers' descriptions leave no details out in the books. You just needed to use a different time and names. It's just lazy writing imo. Sorry if this is harsh I believe you can do better. If you have the courage to put yourself out there like this don't get lazy. If you rewrite this a move it to another time with a different family, let me know. I will read it, I was excited for the story until your description of Paul. His hair is black like his father's and grandfather's. I hope you make the changes.
Chemthree9 months agoThis is a really great story. Not sure why it has such a low score right now. I noticed this is your first story I really wish to encourage you to keep writing.
