All Comments on 'The Heat'

It is exceptionally sensual. It's not explicit yet it creates such vivid imagery of the erotic scene and well done, I'm throbbing!

You are such a great storyteller wow! Every word brought me further into the world you created here. I kinda forgot where I was at for a moment when I reached the end! Can’t wait to see what else you write! I’d you ever decide to release a book, I would so purchase it!

What a lovely, sensual, and hungry dance. All soft, blue shadow and hot, red lust...

Thank you for sharing. :)

I loved this - the voice, the sensuality. Thank you.

Beautifully written ❤️

I am starting my own page under a pseudonym, I'd love it if you had a listen once lit. finishes moderating. Will send in a PM.

Absolutely enjoyable. Well written - detailed, yet fast paced. Erotic in such a delicious way of feeling satisfied and wanting more.

Hope you continue to write.

Man, you are something else. That was exceptional. Why did you go away?

This is one of my favorites, your words are beautiful ❤️

You are an amazing writer. Please keep going