All Comments on 'The Hijab Handjob'

by melissafuentes

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FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67over 7 years ago
Very Hot Five

More Please

luedonluedonover 7 years ago
An interesting little fantasy

I thought this was a well-written little story from somebody who hasn't contributed before. I liked the way it progressed slowly, from step to step, feeling to feeling..

Some of the language seemed a bit like the author was searching for new terms to describe various parts of the anatomy, which I found a bit distracting, but it was survivable.

I look forward to further contributions.

Lue

melissafuentesmelissafuentesover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Hey Lue, I want to thank you for your constructive criticism. You absolutely hit the nail on the head, I was searching for new terms for anatomy. I'm sorry it distracted you but I'm glad you mentioned it because it's something I will watch for going forward.

I thank you for your positive comments!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice

Real hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Imagine...

i would love that girl/woman to give me a handjob.

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uover 3 years ago
Amazing!

Very well done and highly arousing! 5stars

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

there were many arab girls where i went to school. they are so hot!

american soldiers who go to arab lands say the same thing!

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