All Comments on 'The Hike Ch. 05'

by elpavilion

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Great ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good job

Finally a non-cuck ending. Though, interesting that the dude never popped up in the story after the Hike lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Decent

you started off with something that most men have had, a bitchy girlfriend but you went too far from there. I liked the first two chapters but after that I just wanted to finish the series in case you brought it back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very nice

Wow, great ending to a great story. I'm really impressed. Not your conventional cheating story - this was really painful to read (in a good way) and after all he went through, "Dexter's" revenge wasn't over the top at all. Becky deserved it and more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Thank you for ending the story with him fucking that bitch over. At first I fought he was acting like a punk when he wouldn't run around naked with the others, but then when she fucked them without any of them asking if he wanted to join in I wanted bad things to happen to her. Personally I would have left her alone in the woods with no gear in the middle of the night.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good read

I really enjoyed your stories I hope you have another series on the way

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