by elpavilion
Finally a non-cuck ending. Though, interesting that the dude never popped up in the story after the Hike lol.
you started off with something that most men have had, a bitchy girlfriend but you went too far from there. I liked the first two chapters but after that I just wanted to finish the series in case you brought it back.
Wow, great ending to a great story. I'm really impressed. Not your conventional cheating story - this was really painful to read (in a good way) and after all he went through, "Dexter's" revenge wasn't over the top at all. Becky deserved it and more.
Thank you for ending the story with him fucking that bitch over. At first I fought he was acting like a punk when he wouldn't run around naked with the others, but then when she fucked them without any of them asking if he wanted to join in I wanted bad things to happen to her. Personally I would have left her alone in the woods with no gear in the middle of the night.
I really enjoyed your stories I hope you have another series on the way