All Comments on 'The Hillbilly Pt. 02'

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Bronco56Bronco56over 1 year ago

Good btb story. Very enjoyable. 5stars

jazzharpjazzharpover 1 year ago

I too love these three women even if they are only fiction. Since I follow you, I followed you right into non-erotic (which I don't ordinarily check out). Once again, you didn't disappoint.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 1 year ago

They had a stinking good time!

5

johntcookseyjohntcookseyover 1 year ago

Between the pigshit and a bullet, I’m gonna have to go with the bullet. Nothing smells as foul as pigshit. Thanks for starting my Monday morning with a laugh

johntcookseyjohntcookseyover 1 year ago

I think you’ve dug up a mother lode. I hope this is just the next installation with more to come. Such a rich culture with so many interesting characters - kind of a Literotica version of Mayberry, with ‘Hillbilly’ as the central figure/narrator. I’ll keep my fingers crossed. Thanks again.

RanDog025RanDog025over 1 year ago

Good Story! Hillbilly I'd rather be than a dumbed down City Slicker. Ha, I instantly started humming Hank Williams Jr's song, "Country Boys Can Survive." 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! Thank you.

Buster2UBuster2Uover 1 year ago

5 stars for Great writing, Great Story. I love the Happy Ending! good Effort. Thanks Buster2U

A_BierceA_Bierceover 1 year ago

Those three loveable are in hog heaven. Billy, not so much.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 1 year ago

Hilariously fun read. Thanks for the laugh - 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

another story that I love. Over the top. Hell Yes..

26thNC26thNCover 1 year ago

I’m really enjoying these hillbilly stories. It’s great to read about my people. Just_Words is just the best there is posting in Literotica.

CumminginsiderherCumminginsiderherover 1 year ago
I think you could easily

Make a series out of these characters of 1-2 page stories.. Maybe make a Billy Bob and a Bubba type character here and there mixed in with some city born Chad and Tyrones. That could make for some comical but common sense stories.

SithLord6969SithLord6969over 1 year ago

ROTFLMAO!!@!! 5stars and a fave!!!

nestorb30nestorb30over 1 year ago

Amusing

Thanks for writing

Rbtctrl1957Rbtctrl1957over 1 year ago

Karma is a bitch, but shit happens!! LOL

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

****That was a enjoyable follow-up. Thanks for sharing.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

Nothing quite as fragrant as a hog farm lol. Great story with the same "hillbilly" downhome feeling that just makes one smile and know that it's all going to be good. Another chapter wouldn't be a bad idea, hint, hint.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks, everyone. I do have an idea for a 3rd installment, but it isn't fully formed. I must confess that I'm enjoying the "take things into his own hands" kind of character.

mac1729mac1729over 1 year ago

I am really enjoying these stories

Thanks for writing

Omart57Omart57over 1 year ago

Absolutely fantastic, J_W! Loved it!

KaeyoKaeyoover 1 year ago

Oh these stories are fun! Having grown up in a small town on the Olympic Peninsula I know these characters. Only difference being instead of being called “hillbillies” we’re called “loggers”.

Yes, please continue telling tales of this clan and town. Lighthearted fun is great!

anubeloreanubeloreover 1 year ago

Liked this one too, though I'd have liked it even more if he'd been caught before he completed his stupid betrayal and had his head forcibly extracted from his rectum. But I'm a sappy HEA ending addict, heh. Great story, excellent revenge.

clearcreekclearcreekover 1 year ago

the best line was the, "Yes, but my aim is getting better."

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wonderful series, 10 stars, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hillbilly women are ruthless for sure. I work around a married country boy who's known to sleep with any female willing whos wife found about about one of the girls and got her revenge. She supposedly seen the girl driving down the road in a nice new car while pulling their horse trailer behind their F450 which has a big winch bumper. She ran over the back of her car at a redlight. After being ticketed for following to close and sharing insurance information she told the girl to stop fucking her husband and went home.

The idiot just laughed and bought her another walking horse

AngelRiderAngelRider11 months ago

Those are 3 ladies after my own heart.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman9 months ago

LOL What a "load of **** "

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I'll never be able to look at a bacon sandwich in quite the same way again!

menon61menon617 months ago

Loved your hillbily stories. If you like shitty stories like this I would suggest "A Shitty Way to End a Marriage" by qhml1.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Omfg that's a hilarious revenge. He was literally right in the brown stuff up to his eyebrows. Uber humiliation for both of them. Utterly utterly brilliant. Have to say he's one of the luckiest people on this planet. Cheat on a country girl who knows how to hunt, shoot, dress game and doesn't end up shot or losing bodily parts. BardnotBard

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