All Comments on 'The Hillbilly'

I liked it.

Well plotted an well written.

Well done.

Fantastic! Thank you for the story.

Really liked it. No comments. 5

Some of you are going to complain that the asshat got away without any retribution or so much as a limp

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Naw, complaining that the cheating whore did

I have a select group of what I know to be the best writers on this site and I look forward to every new story they write, this is a great example. Just the right Words to show a father's concern for his daughter. Thank you for your tale.

somewhere east of Omaha

Nice little story.

Good story I liked how the story was a bit different from othe stories. Thank you for the story.

A wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it.

Good story but, yeah, I'm going to ding you for letting asshat off with just a scare. Predators need more than a scare to learn their lesson.

Expertly written.

Haven't read a story quite like this. Nicely done. 5 stars.

So... if this happened in another town, how did his pal, the local copper, know about the stray round fired into the motel window some jurisdictions away? Other than that, superlative-worthy story!!! 5+++/5!!

Interesting story!

5

Gotta love a happy ending.

As always, I enjoyed your story. Please keep writing.

5* of course.

From an Arkansas hillbilly…. OutFuckingStanding 5⭐️

Good dad! 5*s

Great story, well written and easy to read. Got my own little girl, with grand kids, and love her to death but they can be a pain in the rear end. Thanks for a good ending.

Perfect story. 5

Since he was close enough...12 gauge... smooth bore barrel... rifled deer slug. No ballistics to match. Just remember to always to pickup your brass.

Loved it! What a good dad!

Excellent. Good stuff. Thanks for posting. 5 stars from me.

Glad for the happy ending. A good father and family. Thanks

If this was a true story I would imagine that it would be a long time before this man would have wanted to be seen even talking to any woman in public without nervously looking around. Even a well slammed door would probably leave him with a wet spot!

somewhere east of Omaha

The last paragraph made this already excellent tale real. I have spent the past 20 years on our 60 acre ranch in the east Texas hill country south of Tyler. The closest town has 300 people and a popular restaurant called Judy’s after its attractive owner. Well… Judy got into a long term affair with a local rancher which led to a divorce. Most of her loyal patrons learned of the affair and bagan to drive to other restaurants for their daily breakfast. Shortly Judy’s folded and Judy moved.

So the stuff in this tale accurately reflects rural realities.

Great story. 5 stars

Nice. Pennsyl-tuckians (long Ohio story) know this well.

At a time when the anyone in law enforcement is branded as racist, bigoted, and bullies, it's nice to see some respect given to them. As evidenced by that quiet 'word to the wise' by his friend the officer. They investigated the matter, and came to a wise conclusion, with no waste of the taxpayers money. Very interesting read, and a clear 5.

So when did his wife apologize to him for doubting him?

How about getting an apology from both his daughter AND his wife for "Interfering"!

Bullet can be traced. Not the powder.

You got Harvey in the story! Super.

I loved the burning urine and Harvey was an engaging man.

Use him for a series!

My bet is that he crapped his pants when that round just missed his head.

The mother better have given great head that night. What I would do.

I have no idea how I missed this the first time, but the follow up brought me here. 5* on to part 2…

Great tale, thank you! A HillBilly's version of "A Father's Love."

Sorry to see that MC's wife didn't "eat crow" and apologize to the MC. She was right there to excoriate him, though he was right.

As far as I know, through chemical analysis they "might" be able to tell what type of powder was used by the burnt remains on a bullet - though the powders all basically use nitrocellulous and something else makes it seem very unlikely. And to trace a bullet to the gun police FIRST need a sample bullet shot by that gun. This story implies that the police must have had occasion to get that sample from Hillbilly.

But NONE of that matter: this was a really good story and I really appreciated it!

Great story as usual. I don’t usually leave the LW site, but I am huge J_W fan, and a proud hillbilly myself. I’m glad I moved over and read this. It rings true in my experiences and reminds me of a time and place I’d love to go back to.

Asshat is lucky he got away with his head still attached to his neck!

****Good read. Thanks for sharing.

Somehow I missed this until I ran across part 2. I loved the fact that in each part, they weren't the same stories that are canned in many of the Literotica stories. Great job and 5 stars for both stories!

Fantastic. Just fantastic. Awesome work, and awesome dad (and father-in-law!)

He had a good ethic...

When just words don't do it, something more emphatic may be called for, such as a .30/30 round.

Bet Asshat won't try for any married pissy again! Next time the guy may be serious and draw down fine...

The only thing I would insist on is a sincere apology from my wife for doubting what I said and jumping down my throat for it! Otherwise, great story. Lol

What about the wife making a totally wrong call and stepping in it big time, while berating hubby?..

very good, enough of a message delivered. Hillbilly's wife must have some apologizing to do and relearn her wedding vows.

Yup I agree. Wife needs to apologize. Daughter too really. Good stuff. Thanks.

Excellent story, good read, believable and that what I like⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

This is how a society is supposed to be - a homogeneous group of like people where problems can be solved. Definitely not the judeo-democracy we have today.