by Just Plain Bob
I don't mean to sound surprised, 'cause you always write well.
I really liked the way the thing with the cops was handled.
What about him and his wife? Well I think that between them.
Regards, DJ
.....AIDS. that's the first thing that came to my mind. ummm, is this supposed to be erotic? part blaming the husband why she became a whore, oh please.
Another helpless humiliated pathetic weak male. Deja Vu all over again and again and again
Liked your story Just Plain Bob. I can also tell that very few of these macho wanna-be types have never been around a truckers pop stand for very long. I liked both this one and the other Hitch Hiker story.
At last a story in which something happens. At last a story with decent dialogue, a story in which there are no off-putting hilarious spelling mistakes. Way to go.
Ignore these pathetic male whiners who see everything in terms of dominance and submission and who apparently have no idea that life is complex.
Dan
Not as good as the other Hitchhiker stories. I couldn't figure out why the husband would take the wife back, particularly after she become a prostitute. The poontang might be good but it's damaged goods.
No wonder this story has a low score for you. He takes her back. He WHAT???
All she had to do was go back to riding along with him, like she had done for the first half of their marriage.
More likely the brother was not the only one, just the one she was caught with.
No touching her cunt with a ten foot pole. Talk about low down nasty stuff. And he should see to it that his brother has a really really bad accident. Screwing your brother's wife is about as bad as it gets. I'm sure their parents would be proud. But I don't care how horny he is. No way to get back with the slut.
He can't take her back,because as soon as he is on the road,she will start all over again.
His Brother? She's a lying, cheating cunt. Why not TALK to her husband before screwing another man and work something out? Who knows how many diseases she's carrying?
Easily the worst story in this series, making no sense. It would have been a more enjoyable story if the main character turned her in when the police requested it and truthfully told them the whole story.