All Comments on 'The Hobb's Place'

And fairly well written. Thank you.

Discriptive, full of charactor, roller coaster ride of words and definetely a Halloween 'spoof' for Lit, Good Luck (~_*) Happy Halloween~

Colly,

That was a great story. It left me shivering as you never know what you will meet in the dark.

I especially liked the way you intertwined the past and the present.

Good luck.

Damn Colly,

That is creepy! Left me wondering though, again you spaced the giving of information perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

*hugs* from a shivery Becca

very eloquent, with just the right amount of horror and intrigue

... of sexual predator. I love the direction in which you took the story!

For a Halloween contest. Shivers ran up my spine but I loved every moment of it. Good luck Colly!

I am in awe at your deft hand in this story! Hot sex and lust that turns to horror at the perfect moment, and you leave us guessing at evey turn. This is wonderful!

Your descriptions are pretty amazing, as always. Just curious as to why the sexual element of many of your stories seems to revolve around 2 or more women. There are so many other possibilities, it seems like you might want to try them just for the sake of variety. I confess my small brain did not get the ending....Surely, this was not the inspector seducing him, but one of the unheard women upstairs? Or a different woman entirely? Still, fascinating story, the description in the first two paragraphs was about as extraordinary as I've read!

This was really scary, all the way through and I love the way you brought everything together at the end. It was sexy too, not a usual combination.

Interesting twist too...the gang member/rapist. heh heh...I'll not say anymore.

Never judge a book by the cover …. Some waters run deep …… yes those old sayings have wisdom and nowadays we just ignoring real wisdom and poisoning ourselves …. The earth is starting paying back as well as other creatures does in this tale

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Amazing! Such a vivid and creative plot! It has gore, hot steamy sex, tension... A witch, a possession full of lust, a monstruous offspring... so, so good!