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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
The Holdup

Good start, I enjoyed what has been written already, hate to wait for the rest. Gets me hot just thinking of the potential hot situations these characters can get up. 3 women and at least 3 men (not including husbands/boyfriends) to be used. Please include some of your hot gagging and spankings to this story. I wonder if the robbers will make a 'quick' getaway or stay for a while (since Friday is the start of the weekend) and no one should get suspicious for a while.

Thanks and hurry with the next parts.

xoxo

Stefani

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
The Holdup

One of the best rape stories, I have ever read. A brilliant idea that the three women have different physical features. Please explain the clothes and the shoes of the women in more detail. I always prefer if they are being raped as they have their clothes and shoes on. I can hardly wait for the second part:)

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