All Comments on 'The Honeytrap'

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Blue_SixBlue_Sixalmost 20 years ago
Babe for hire

I realize the line of work but still all she should have done was say he took the bait not her ass. Good story though

gnfgnfalmost 20 years ago
Great short

story. It just left off too soon. The ending really speaks for a follow up with the wife. What is she going to do? There are so many things that can happen, and in the set up, we are left wondering if this is going to be divorce court or is she looking to avenge herself in another fashion?

Hope you continue with this thread and let us in on what is going to happen with your devious mind.

Thanks, and keep the stories coming.

George

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
awesome

very hot woman there. and no messing around with a lot of plot. just quick and dirty sex. good action - and well written.

eric shawn listoeric shawn listoalmost 20 years ago
Great!

Someone who knows how to write an ass fuck!

esl

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
a really good ride

ggooodd job. what about a sequel? susie sounds like the type of girl we all wish to stumble into in our lives at least once. keep it up.

peebudypeebudyover 12 years ago
ass-stounding!

great story twist!

fishgetterfishgetterabout 3 years ago

In 17 years there are 6 ( SIX ) comments? Hel, the ones with only a 3.0 have more than this measly number of comments. God story by the way.

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