All Comments on 'The House Ch. 01'

me like! you're on a roll kalamazoo!

GOOD READ GURL U REALLY KNOW HOW TO WRITE A STOREY BUT I SO WANT U TO FINISH UP WITH THE REST OF THE STORIES THAT U HAVE ALREADY DONE STARTED LIKE MASON, WOLF SO PLEASE GET ON THOSE BEFORE U BEGAN ANOTHER STORY

Love the start to this story...going to be a strange ride:)

Please, please update soon....Really good start

just a quick note 2hrs south of memphis is jackson ms. nashville is about 2hrs east.

i tried to visualize in my head

I' am just curious to see where this story goes...lol. I like it because it is interesting and unique. And you are painting a great picture in this story I just curious to see where this all leads and how is this interaction thingy is going to work. Good start!

This is a great start to this story and I'm waiting to see where you go with it.

I just know that I'm jealous that you can do it so often and in so many different stories. Brava!

I do not know how I missed this submission. You truly have raised the standard on this site as to how a realistic interracial story is told. Whereas it appears that most stories in this category have a pervasive underlying guilt factor. One party of the equation does not feel worthy of the the affections of the other party due skin coloring, body features and hair texture?? Your approach to interracial dating is a normal occurrence between a man and a woman desiring one another.

This new story has my interest and I can't wait to read more so please hurry....

I know sexism was just a part of the many prejudices of the day, but ugh! This Aaron character has me riled! I mean come on: "She was mouthy just like this one and that was alright to a point but then she forgot who was the man and who the woman was expressing views that a woman shouldn't be discussing in public." Ooooh, I'm having a little fit just thinking about a man talking to me that way. R-E-S-P-E-C-T - it goes both ways! Granted Clara was annoying, but she was really just a victim of the times. According to the story so far, she was actually willing to marry someone of a "lesser" class for love instead of money, except her greedy ass dad wouldn't have it. And, okay, maybe the family that moved into the house was your average annoying modern family, but tearing their house apart is just infantile - and by the way, the house doesn't belong to him any more! He need's to take his tired, dead, old ass and "go into the light already!" ...or whatever it is that dead people do, instead of giving living people grief that still have to deal with everyday life.

KEEP ON WRITING