All Comments on 'The House Ch. 10'

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VivienleeVivienleeover 12 years ago
one word comes to mind

sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Fabulous!!!

pmpktypmpktyover 12 years ago
Wonderful

This was a great ending. I loved this whole story

QuietmahoganystormQuietmahoganystormover 12 years ago
That was so fucking awesome

Five stars, ten if I could give it. I loved the entire series!!!! Please share more stories - they are wonderful!

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
Absolutely wonderful!

Deeply touching.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Loved this!!!

This was such a great story. I love all your work.

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyover 12 years ago
Brilliant

Brilliant and wonderful, the story and your talent! Write on ;-D

FatBottomedGirlFatBottomedGirlover 12 years ago
So touching!

What a wonderful ending you gifted us with. Thank you very much!

lilwolfspiritlilwolfspiritover 12 years ago
Wonderful Story!!!

i loved this story everything about it and thank you so much for posting it for us to enjoy.

Donna

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 12 years ago
wow

really that is all that should be said about this story and the writer, stunning i loved it from start to finish.

green2ballsgreen2ballsover 12 years ago
Fabulous.

I waited and read each chapter , made me want more , Lady you are gifted. And brilliant You gave her 2 men, and both loved her passing the line of death.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Absolutely Wonderful!!

I loved this story from start to finish.

It was well-written and even believable.

In the end, it was as it should have been... Aaron, Minerva, and Dwight... happily together, forever.

~Bluegardenia

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127over 12 years ago
Kalamazoo you're the BEST!!!!!

If only to walk into the dark knowing that you have not one but two loves there to guide you and spend eternity. The way you tell a story with so much detail and love I tell you this much you are more than talented. You've blessed us with these stories from your heart and artistic mind. My wish for you is one day to email us your faithful followers to let us know your stories Ethan - Wolves are all in one book for us to upload or turn pages for us to constantly go to and read. Think on it .... You're wonderful Kiddo...

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Fantastic................Utterly fantastic closure

OMG!!!! You wrapped this up so well!!!! It was worth getting up a full hour before

work to read this last chapter.

Darlin' you made my day!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Such a great ending!!!

I love all your stories!!!

Some day, I hope to be able to get your published writings to add them to my library. To be able to re-read them because they are such great stories is my dream.

Awaiting updates to "Mason" and "I'll love you forever" - I am always checking for your updates.

Again, thank you for your talent and such great stories!!!

vt

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
,

Sex Magick with a ghost, seriously?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Supreb

You are a outstanding writer and thank you for these wonderful stories.

huntersangelhuntersangelover 12 years ago
i'm so awed by your talent

such an excellent writer you are kalamazoo, i'm so glad i found your stories. they make me feel really happy and in this instance i feel a touch of melancholy also. don't stop writing and i hope to read more from you real soon. my best wishes to you and all your efforts!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
proud

I Cried So Much Because It Was So Good ......

Great Writer!!!!!

pandaruspandarusover 12 years ago
Wonderful!

Such an engaging story! I enjoyed your characterizations immensely. All three were likable and decent enough to easily cheer for, but still complicated and imperfect enough to relate to and care about. Thank you for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Beautiful story...

Could there maybe be a tiny blurb about our trio scaring some folks as a delivery mechanism for some Sadie and Henry?

Happy Holidays!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wonderful story

I loved it

donaldedonaldeover 12 years ago
what a story

You are truly a gifted and talented writer I could not stop reading this wonderful story thank you so much for posting it looking forward to reading many more stories form you.

Pleae do everyone of us a big favor and get published

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow

You had me screaming,crying, and laughing!! Well done...I'll be over here dabbing my tears because of the beautiful finale

Jujubee58Jujubee58over 12 years ago
What A Ghost Story!!!!

This was one of the best ghost stories I've ever read!

polgaranightpolgaranightover 12 years ago
Sniff Sniff!!!!!!!

That was such a heart warming ending and it made me cry.... but that's ok,u also left it open for future stories...

This is one ghost story that I will be reading again and again and again and..............

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Very well done!

Thank goodness I discovered you late! I was spared the frustration of waiting for each chapter to unfold. I was able to read from start to finish with no waiting - and I couldn't stop! :D

You are the rare creature who not only has a wonderful idea (or 3), you are also able to write well. You are articulate, you can spell AND you can construct a sentence. Your story is well paced. You can build tension and release and supply the twists necessary to hold interest.

You, my dear, are a gem.

MadameblaqueMadameblaqueabout 12 years ago
Love It!!!

This was the best ghost story I've ever read. A love story and a ghost story combined that was fantastic. I love your ability to tell a story so well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Best ghost story.

I am very thankful that I found this story. Defiantly the best ghost story I have ever read, and it is one on the best stories I have ever read on this site, and I have been here for years. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Excellent work

I've read most of your stories and I have to say you are truly talented. Thank you for sharing your gift with us. I am a huge fan of your work.

IsoarianIsoarianabout 12 years ago
Wow

I don't usually read erotica about ghosts, but this one almost made me want to cry it was so good. Thank you

ebony_princess4ebony_princess4almost 12 years ago
Boss!!!

i just read the entire story and i must say it had me on the edge of my seat for most it and scared at other parts a few "awwww's" sprinkled in and jokes in all the right places. I adore this story and give you a round of applause. I love how our heroine stayed true to herself throughout the entire work. she was as feisty and stubborn in the beginning as she was in the end. I love it thank you for writing it and posting it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Addicted to your writing!

I began reading your marvelous writings with 'Kane'...and you have not once disappointed me with your stories!! You are a genius at this thing called 'writing' and I have absolutely fallen in love with all of your wonderful stories!! Your next story should be on the 'New York Times Best Seller List'! Good Luck and thank you for the stories!

mrskelleymrskelleyalmost 12 years ago
Genius!!!

This was a different story, but I love it nonetheless. You are one of my favorite top authors!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I LOVE YOUR WORK!!!

What an interesting ending. Love eternal is something that people yearn for. Thanks for this story. It made my night. YOU ARE A WONDERFULLY TALENTED WRITER!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
amazing!!!!!!!

Awesome!!!!! Ur 1 talented writer!! I love. Yo writings and am in AWE of yo talent!! U need 2 b published,I live in South Africa and cannot wait 2 c u on the best seller list! U deserve it and more! Thanx

ScorpMoonScorpMoonover 11 years ago
impressive

Very impressive and intriguing story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wow...

Truly amazing story. Please write more like this one! I loved it! :)

QueenbiggumzQueenbiggumzabout 11 years ago
Beautiful!

I love your work and this series was one of my favorites

Keep it up

More Please

primrose227primrose227about 11 years ago
Good work!

Again, I praise you for your storytelling ability. It's not the type of story that I generally read, well hell, neither are vampire stories, but you weave a story so well I couldn't help but admire your talent. I don't know where you get your ideas, but they work. It looks like the trio in this story will have an eternal menage. lol

countrygirlflacountrygirlflaover 10 years ago
SUPURB!!!!!!

Not exactly they type of story i usually read,,,but once i started i could not stop until i finished it all,,,,and loved it...it was so nice to come upon something so different and refreshing,,,Thanks,,,,

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
I nearly didnt read this when i realised it was a ghost story

But i am so glad i did.

it was very well written

CrissySnowCrissySnowabout 10 years ago

I accidentally discovered this story when I was on the hunt for a good white guyxblack girl story and I got here. I fell in love with this story from chapter one. I do have to admit I hated the ending it just seemed really depressing but fitting for a ghost story. I am attached to this story emotionally for some odd reason. Please post more like this. I will check out your other stories. I see you are quite the writer. Keep going! Love it.

BronzeaphroditeBronzeaphroditeabout 8 years ago
Forget the vampires!

I love this story. The last chapter brought me to tears! Even though it is great that mating with vampires brings immortality, being sure that a supernatural being appreciates you no matter your appearance is really precious. I'd love to read more chapters about their marital life.

Even though Aaron loves Minerva they're from different times. Imagine him forbidding her from wearing short shorts or mini skirts in the hot summer in public, not to mention she is or was an ambitious career woman.

You also cannot get away from the fact that Aaron's family were slave owners and he was not up to date on the changes the loss of the war brought to the the US.

AmazonBeauty1966AmazonBeauty1966over 5 years ago
Excellent!

This was a delicious tale well told!! Good work ~ thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

This is one of best stories. I loved it. Thank you

FrozenSunFrozenSunover 2 years ago

Sweet molasses! I'm so glad I read this! And thank you for not taking it down like other writers. Definitely adding to my list to reread down the road. Thank-you for the ride!

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