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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Wow... very unexpected

A very creative and oddly erotic story!

AllisonraeAllisonraealmost 12 years ago
Hot

Yea. I agree with the other comment.

Allison.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Kinda creepy but good!

I hope there is a chap. 2 i wanna know if they kill him or keep him around. It was kinda scary but i liked the suspense.

LadyPartsLadyPartsalmost 12 years ago
Fabulous!

Creepy, but in a very good way. Great characterizations! Enjoyed this very much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
There's only two words that can adequately describe this story!

FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Not an ordinary short story

Short, fast paced, witty, lots of funny surprises - and still with lots of details that really make the scenes and interactions come alive. Its a bit far on the dark & wild fantasy side.

Had great fun reading. Thank You

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First off, I thrive on feedback; so please fire away when you get the urge. I read it all and it often brings different perspectives. The main thing making me a little unusual is that I'm bi-polar … with some serious medication on board to stay semi-normal. My other character...

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