All Comments on 'The House on Wilshire Road'

Well told, moderately violent Rape.There was no emotion expressed by him, only her during the sex. He appeared to get his main pleasure from beating her.That difference seems a bit out of sync with the apparently "happy ever after" ending. It might have been more convincing if he had belted her much harder(perhaps whipped her - it's more sinister) in the first place and then suffered the conflicting emotions of satisfied revenge/remorse. She of course was pretty confused anyway, but upping the ante would have put the story in emotional technicolour albeit melodramatic technicolour rather than the slightly insipid conclusion

There were Tricks and treats in your tail...I meant tale!! Good story and Good luck (~_*) Happy Halloween

Chilling, thrilling story. Good luck with the contest!

... in so many different directions with this story! Creeped out, turned on, repulsed. Very well crafted. Not over the top, as less talented authors would have done. Best of luck!

It might have helped this story to make the male character more of a warm fuzzy type. The rape scene was a bit brutal and took away my pleasure of the story. Otherwise well done...good luck!

Wow! Suspense, BSDM and incest too. A very good read, an entertaining ride that holds the reader close.