by SPEN STERLING
Kept me hanging up to the end. I did think that H T could be 'hot tub', but the hole in the hedge was a beautiful touch. Thank you.
This story made me laugh. The idea of this pillar of society - so aware of his professional obligations - being caught out for years by a strange slip of a girl is hilarious. What is slightly creepy is that she knows exactly what to do to get her own way. Hints of blackmail and coertion cast their shadow over this story and I can't help wanting to know what happens next.
Liked the way you kept the title of the diary a mystery until the end. Liked your first person narrative choice also.
I have read five of your stories so far and this is the Best One Yet. Great ending!!
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Enjoyable read. Enjoyed the wit even more than the story and the sex :)
Great story but it ended too quickly. I would like to hear more about Hanna because she seems to be special and we have no idea why. Is her fantasies just about the acts or really about the guy? Would they develop a relationship?
A lot of opportunity for expansion...
I have read quite a few of your stories. This one tops them all. Please continue. Mystery, Intrigue, keep it up. Very very good read. Lots of smiles.
Would love to read about the remainder of the fantasies especially the ones with more than one female.
Eccentric girls with odd, inscrutable personalities. Hanna delivers, and so, I love her. Great job.
clinical research in the name of science. I'm certain some procedures will have to be conducted more than once to verify replication and viability.