All Comments on 'The Humiliation of Kyra Florence'

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HandcuffGirlHandcuffGirlover 13 years ago
Nice

I would have liked a little different uniform, but good story. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I hate myself

enjoying!!! the story, but you did a great job. Hot.

ZaneJZaneJover 13 years ago
Fucking masterful

I think you have the skills to do this professionally. You'd probably have to draw out her motivations and inner experiences of all this a bit more to appeal to the female-reader-driven erotic lit industry, but you've got great story-telling and dialogue chops.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Finally!

Awesome story as always. Will be interesting to see how you take this further. I hope this is the start of a comeback. In any case, I really hope we won't have to wait another five years for chapter two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Loved it

Please continue.

RobypuzoRobypuzoover 13 years ago
Hot Story!

Thanks for great story! "The Pimp" still my favorite story by Patric, but this one really hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Really fun read

great story and so funny!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Definitely Needs a Sequel

More Please this store is great

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wrong category

This is about a nigger and a white. This is interracial.

jennerbill6jennerbill6over 1 year ago

Well done. Interesting premise

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Basic trash. Not erotic in the least.

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