All Comments on 'The Hungry Wolf Ch. 01'

Looking forward to the next chapters!!!

Well I'll be keeping an eye out for your updates, rated 5 stars and added it to favourites! Thanks for sharing.

very well written and enticing I will certainly be folowing this story.

I hope that you will upload the next chapter soon.

So great. Very well written. Excellent dialogue. You have me hooked and hoping for more. I'm already in love so please keep it coming quickly. Great to see a story like this with a women my age instead of in her 20's. :-)

Amazingly well-crafted and full of detail and texture. Thank you.

This is great!!! Please keep up the FABULOUS work and story!!!

Mooore plz !!!!

I'm hooked!

Please write more! You are very talented. One of the better written stories I've read on here.

please write more!!! i love it!!!

You write so realistic and make me feel so comfortable, like I belong to the story.

Nice work. Can't wait for the next chapters.

One of the best written stories on here. Well done.

so well written - please continue!

Thank you for writing a story that for once:

Doesn't involve a stunning 25 old with huge boobs

A girl that doesn't lose her tongue or her brains when her mate comes by

Keeps her rationél together

Hooked, well done

Really enjoyed

Loved the interpaly between the main characters, well written and I am looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully explaining more about Charlottes reticiency about everything. Althugh back of my mind says abuse both phisical and mental.

Very well written and very captivating Well Done

Thoroughly enjoy this story... cant wait for the next chapters...

I am thrilled about this first chapter!! I cant wait for more!!!

Please keep writing!

love it cant wait for more

This is great!!! Can't wait to hear what happens. Please keep writing.

Please don't keep us waiting too long! Totally loved it:)

I'm totally ensnared, please continue asap.

I don't even care about bliss anymore, all I want is this.

You got me hooked;can't wait for you to continue lol

I hope you've written ahead so we won't be in pain long.

Love it!!!!!!!!!!! Please don't keep us waiting!!!!!!

Very curious about her past and how Damien is going to win her over.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Looking forward to another great chapter in the story,,,,great,,,ty

I just stumbled across this story, and I love it!!! I'm really anxious to find out what it is that Charlie's running from and what happened to her. I felt so bad for Damian at the end of this. I can't wait to see what you have in store for them next, but I hope that Charlie will be able to let go of whatever the pain is that she's holding on to and let Damien in.

Oh, how I wish more stories on this site were like this:

It has *gasp* AN ACTUAL PLOT!

*GASP*

AND IT'S WELL WRITTEN TOO!

(no, I'm not being sarcastic in any way)

Good quality writing - well done, and thank you :-)

A couple of notes (I can't stop myself from going into editor-mode):

". . . trying to spend some of the adrenaline surging through her . . ." - it might be better to use "expend" (to use up; consume) rather than "spend".

". . . lifting her car enough to change the tire . . ."

". . . and seated the iron on the first lug nut . . ."

It's easier to change a tyre if you loosen the nuts slightly (just breaking the resistance), before lifting the car - having the wheel on the ground ensures that you're turning the nuts, not the wheel.

"The rim has a crack in it and when you had the blow out you dented the front axle."

I know diddly-squat about cars, but this sounds unlikely - wouldn't our heroine realise that too?

So far, I'm liking these characters . . .

Your characters are instantly captivating and endearing!

It's better than a lot of fantasy that I have read that was printed. Thank you, for a marvelous time with your story!

Lost me at '40 year old woman'. .... Not sexy when you are my moms age

Go clean your room!

I'm having trouble with the fact she's 40 (I know, ageism is bad...). It is kind of old to be a "mate" though, right? I keep telling myself that she looks like a brunette Christina Hendricks (who is 38 but isn't soccer momish) to make myself read on.

I'm glad I looked past that.

*****

I like the fact that the female character is a WOMAN, not a girl. I get tired of so many storylines where all the "sweet young things" are with older guys who take advantage of the females' naiveté. I find the change refreshing and original. ;)

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Hey there - today is Monday, October 27, 2014, and yes, I am alive.

Sorry to have left you all so long, sorrier still to have left Damian and Charlie for so long. I have been through almost a year of one heartbreak after another. An end to a marriage of almost two decades, an end to a new relationship, an end to friendships I thought were wholly unbreakable...the pain, the hurt, was real, it was physical, and it clouded everything. Even the precious time I spent with the Dimeos and Charlie.

Yeah, I know how it sounds. But consider this: it's not an EXCUSE. It's an explanation.

It took me a while to get over it all. But I did. The past is the past; I cannot change what happened, and honestly don't think I would wish to at this point.

I appreciate everyone's patience and understanding. I am writing again. It was hard to start again, but that - thankfully - was short lived. Even better, I am hearing Damien and Charlie and Becky and everyone again. Which is a grand thing.

I will have the next chapter up ASAP.

Best,

-W

Keep your chin up and know you're great! :-)

Thanks for posting!

I absolutely love this story!