All Comments on 'The Hunt Pt. 01'

It would have been more descriptive of what happened with the rest of the guys as they were hit with the tennis balls. There were six per team right? And the first two were 1 minute out of almost 5 minutes for each? Good start. You could write a sequel about the women being the hunted ones. This was unique start to a story. There could have been more contests but maybe those will come later?

Waiting for next part

Loved it, of course there should be more challenges but it would be better if you described with more detail the ballbusting

Loved it, I would be more descriptive on the ballbusting