by eroslit
The story carried me along with a good plot and no grammatical or spelling distractions. I stayed up far too late to finish what was presented. If more had been there I would still be reading.
I love a good mystery. I appreciate the characterization and the good writing. Please continue.
I feel the tension building being myself a cyclist having come in a strange new town.
Who looks guilty. Who stand to gain? What mystery is lurking in the houses of the people in the country side. Will Sherlock Holmes with his female companion crack this case.
I sure hope so. Make it happen. Somewhere is the killer. Surprise us all.