All Comments on 'The Husband's Night Out'

Ok. But it needs proofreading.

On page 1 Kevin is 23 but on page 2 he is 21.

On page 1 Queenie is 47 and Nina is 30. But on page 2 Nina has a 24 year old son.

You also state that Queenie and Nina where in high school together but with the age difference i find that impossible.

Reminds me of the old Greenleaf Press adult novels, hot,well-written and very descriptive. The illustrated version would be great! Plenty of potential here. Can Nina's son join in for a hot fourway? How about a couple of hot,gilf grandmothers? Can't wait for the next episode.

Same as the other guy. Needs some proofreading. The age changing, some grammar. Also a few words really feel out of place for the grammatical style of the rest of the story like diaphanous and halcyon.

Sex, then more sex, followed by more of that sex stuff, and ending with the promise of even more. sex.

please continue

At no point was it stated that Nina was 30 yrs old. It was stated that Nina was a friend of 30 yrs, as in a friendship lasting that long, reinforced by the fact that they were friends in high school. You must remember that these stories are written by amateur writers and a reasonably intelligent reader should be able to understand the logical thoughts being conveyed.

Great 5* story, continue!

I wanted to say while did not read the story I wanna say thanks for saying what the story contains