All Comments on 'The Hypnotist'

Nice enough idea, though it has been done before, but way too short.

AUTHOR'S NOTE: For those disappointed with its length (oh, how it hurts me to write that double entendre!), this story is part of the 750 Word Project - a Literotica challenge to authors. See complete details at https://www.literotica.com/s/the-750-word-project-2020- and see my other stories if you're in the mood for something longer and thicker (now THAT feels better!). :)

Very nice!

Thanks for squeezing so much into so little.

Would love to see a longer version in full story form!

Needed a story to go with your idea. Liked the ending, in fact liked the idea.

There was enough backstory to indicate her preferences and why she saved herself for Jack, and the hypnosis interplay was sweetly done in so few words. Flash stories are all about a moment and enough projection that the future can come from the reader's imagination. 5*.

Very nice and sweet short story!