All Comments on 'The Ice-Breaker Ch. 01'

But wait, wasn't the very first ice story for you? ;) Doesn't matter. You do the writing, you deserve a favorite, too. Cool, and give us more. :) One thing -- Troy? Troy!?!? Really? ;) Ah well.

Im not a hockey fan or have i ever watched a game but i have to say I LOVE,LOVE, LOVE your stories. I cant wait for the next chapter. Is it going ot be up soon??

Mugsy- Your stories are amazing. I only started liking hockey about 4 years ago and am now hooked. Everytime I read one of your or pennlady's stories I am trying to figure out who it is:) They are very well written and are great for fantasizing. Thanks for the email to let me know that you were posting another one. I've been having major withdrawls:)

I totally love all the Ice hockey stories. . Being from South Africa, hockey is kinda foreign for us, let alone ICE HOCKEY!! Lol. . Anyway its a fantastic escape for me and I love all of your stories and characters.

It was such a pleasant surprise to wake up and find another fantastic hockey story written by you! :D I can't wait to read the following chapters! So cute that she fell asleep on him! Please keep 'em coming! I find myself comparing the actual players to the players in your stories! LOL Thanks for sharing another fantastic hockey story!

I'm so happy you decided to write another story. I've always been a sucker for hockey players myself...

You are fantastic! You know, I became a hockey fan because of you! Thanks for another great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I enjoy your stories but wish you would use other settings than hockey. The hockey centered stories have become old.

Dont worry about the critics,write on a topic that interests you .This story is well written and enjoyable.Ps I know nothing about ice hockey.

I haven't the first idea about hockey or how the game is really played but your stories have helped me understand the game a bit more. I also love the romance between all your characters. P.S. I cant wait for Hound's story :)

As always, your stories are wonderful! I can't wait to see how this one turns out!

IM LOVING ALL THE ICE HOCKEY STORIES!!!!! cant wait to read the next part max

I really paid no attention to ice hockey ... but having read your stories and enjoyed them, I intend to pay attention to the Olympic hockey games this year. Thanks for sharing your stories ... they are excellent!!! And I find myself wanting more hockey stories ... I'm sure there are plenty of teams and players out there to keep you in subject matter. :-)

long lead in building to a story instead of wham bamming it keep it up

i've probably said this before but i'm not a hokey person i'm from tennessee we have a team but i've never really been into it! but i do LOVE your stories! if i wasnt already married to my dream man i'd def go to a game just to look and see if any of the guys are anything like you write about!!! keep it up!!!

Love the story and looking forward to more. Enjoyed how you built up the story and established characters.

I haven't given much thought about Ice Hockey since the Flyers didn't quite get that Hat Trick in '76 but you and PennLady have me interested again! Great opening chapter and I love the way you establish your characters.

Can't wait for more!

Yes! Excited! Can't wait!

It was great, as always*

I love that all your hockey stories are different. Yes, they're all about players, but none of them are similar to the others. Amazing*

I beg you to ignore anyone who wants you to stop writing about hockey! LOVE your stories and really love that they are about my favorite subject....hockey! Keep 'em coming! And can't wait to read more about Alex (LOL, almost used his real name) and Kaitlyn!

Another good one, glad to see there is more comming, will wait patiently for more to come.

I LOVE this so far! I can't wait for more!

Not only am I am fan of you and PennLady, but now you've also made a hockey fan out of me! Keep up the good work :)

How did I miss this whole series? Damn! Okay, gonna start reading now. I'll comment on the final chapter, or if something really strikes me, I'll comment before. Either way, I haven't abandoned you, Mugsy. Just had a lot on my plate lately.

Just found your stories and I've been trying to stretch them out for the last couple of weeks. Great work! One comment: "Only natives of Winnipeg still talk about the Jets..." I realize this is set during the 2010 Olympics but I've just got to say it.

The Jets are back!

You are a brilliant author. Ever consider getting book deals and striking it rich. Your stories flow so effortlessly. More please.

12. The Ice-Breaker (AP and Kaitlyn):

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-ice-breaker-ch-02

I love the fact that this is based in Calgary. When a story is in the same city I live in it makes me go more into reading it. But Flames sick!

Love your writing!