All Comments on 'The Ice Cream Man Ch. 02'

. . tend to let their characters sweat the small stuff.

Take this guy, He's raking in six figures, to marry the cutest girl and a half, with a free house, and money by the bucket-load on her side, and he's worried about a relief driver for an ice cream wagon.

I might call it 'batting out of your league, but still scrubbing the baseballs clean'.

Oh yes, technically perfect, and it delivers what it promises, an interesting insight into possible human behaviour.

Cheers, and Thanks,

Kilroy.

dont forget to stoke the home fires. TK U MLJ LV NV

My suspicion that the initial accident was relevant was supported. Now I am worried about Nicole. I hope that there are no traumatic experiences in the near future.

His insecurity could be a problem.

as good as usuall,. if you posted the whole story at once i can choice to read it thru or not in one sitting, this way it becomes agonizing to wait for the next chapter.. dg hear your the best i hope you can keep them coming for ever..

You are so good with your romance stories and I expect to see some twits and turns over the next two chapters. Not sure if it's Jeff's nervousness or what but I get this sense of impending doom. Will she cheat? Is the baby even his? Time will tell I guess.

Thanks for be such a consistently good writer.

I am sure she will either cheat or the baby is not his. The disclaimer that it could go in any category is the key. I doubt she will be a true loving wife. What a concept? They seem to be in lust not love. He has trust issues.

Still a well written part, shame it will end with their demise.

In the delivery room... IT's BLACK!!!

if his rubber came off or broke and she was pregnant on a prior sexual encounter. what happened to the morning after pill. i hope this couple have a long life together. considering they are going into this marriage not knowing how they fit together . 2 months is to short a time. and it is turning into a shootgun wedding.. well see how this will turn out..

To count down: Before wedding were months!!!!!!! 6 moths+wedding -3 months =First night date.............

... and it looks like Jeff is starting to see some cracks in his relationship with Jen. It's almost like he's being swallowed up by the Bradley's money plus there seems to be major concerns on his part about her promiscuity.

Wife will want the rich ways she is used to or after the baby is born she will want to party and the husband will be too tired. DG, I hope you work it out for these nice people.

thanks for the offering. Seems so familiar.

A good chapter.

However, I see strange things. Jen's parents do not like Nicole, something they must have seen in her ...

Then there is concern about the difference in Jen's standard of living compared to Jeff, will she get used to living with less money in her day-to-day life?

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Is there trouble brewing on the horizon with Jen being used to a much richer environment? Or will her love and her baby be enough to satisfy her? Will her wild lifestyle resurface, send her back to partying and create havoc in her marriage? Where will Nicole and Jen end up?

The story sure is intensifying...

Is Jeff starting to see some cracks in his relationship with Jen. I hope he is not all swallowed up by greed, his or his wife's. Is Jeff wondering more and more about his wife's promiscuity and her former wild life, especially with Jen's best friend, Nicole, being back too close in the picture?

Let's see where it goes

5*

BJ