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by brunorivera

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Good story, but needs a bit more development

Enjoyable, but a bit rushed, as if you'd had a deadline. Needs more character development for Ron, and possibly Melissa's softer side which lead to her getting it on with Ron.

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