All Comments on 'The Initiation'

MORE PLEASE. I DO THINK THE SHIT IS ABOUT TO HIT THE FAN

Better off in non-consent/reluctance?

Just wondering if this was going to be continued or not? I would love to read more about Lily, Clayton, Guy, Emery and Boss.

plz do more it was relly good and id like to read more

This has the makings of a novel/novella, exploring Lily's past with her father and her future with the biker gang (are there intimations she'll end up w/Burg?). There are so many possibilities for character development here! Plus, the transformation of L. from virgin to perpetually available sex toy is extremely hot.

I bet she ends up as a real biker doll. tough and stands for no shit. and has her own bike.great story. so far???.. more please lots more

please make another chapter too this story.

smothly written and very gripping just had t6o finish to the end --- or is this the end????F

That was great. Would love to read more

She has no self respect and her man doesn't care for her at all. A real strong woman would walk away from ALL the abusive men in her life- not from the home of one to the bed of 5. She makes me ill. This is a disgrace to women who date bikers.

What's with all your male characters being bi polar one moment they're normal and nice and the next they're suddenly back handing a girl and angry at her for some stupid thing

A bikers story why are they using the word pussy in stead of cunt another is breast instead of tits if I wanted a romance novel I'll find one