All Comments on 'The Institute Stories Set 02'

I have been eagerly waiting for this next chapter, and on the whole am thrilled by how you've continued it. It was a little less erotic than the first since you seemed to be focusing on plot development, and at times confusing because of the introduction of so many characters without a quick refresher of how they're all connected to each other. I didn't recall Stephanie from Ch. 1, yet she seemed to be so central here.

Nonetheless, I think you've got a fascinating story here, and can't wait to see how you'll develop it further. Once the whole thing is complete, all the parts might make more sense.

Bravo, and keep up the good work.

Wild. A bit hard to follow some bits. But still some great, crazy world building.