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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Fabulous Story! It would be great though if...

Fabulous Story!

It would be great though if in the next chapter you could tell us how Rob had seduced his then very reluctant mother.

How he had broken down all her moral codes and over time made her his willing sex toy.

doug_noughtdoug_noughtabout 9 years ago
Damn I loved this...

...read this when it was first published. Sorry I took so long to comment. Sorry I got nothing to comments except that I loved it!

cr3mp13cr3mp13over 5 years ago
Loved it

Hope you keep going on this. Can't wait to read about Julie getting her first creampie!!

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I write very amateurish fantasy for my own amusement and hopefully for others. I am strictly a two-fingered typist, so stories take hours to complete and sometimes finish due to cramping, resulting in careless editing and sudden stops. I attempt to present views from bo...