All Comments on 'The Invention of Sharon's Secret'

Loved it!

[Sing-song] Sharon't got a secret! [Repeat twice, then shout] BOYFRIEND!

Great story. Well written, few errors, kept me interested. Makes me want to check out your other works.

Awesome story, nicely written, love the nerd catches the good girl. Great story arc, please surprise us with a follow up story.

A bit bonkers in some ways but I loved it. Well written and I was hoping for a romance of sorts.,5⛤

Great story and kept this engineer hard throughout. Great descriptions. Happy for both characters as well. Excellent writing!

Another winner!

5

Very clever! As always, great characterizations.

Thanks for the fun ride.

A masterpiece! As an engineer who has spent over forty years designing and developing machines, I can tell you that you got it exactly right. I loved it!

Hans

Fanciful and engaging. Very imaginative, Thanks for fine story.

I think that the story was interesting and creative. The engineer in me definitely liked the thought process and description of the design process. I agree with hamstring or view of your story. I have a similar background.

Okay, I don’t know just something wasn’t there for me.,

The xwife and xhusband were a little to much like loosers. Sharon and Richard were real feeling. Liked the story a .ot

Great nerd story! It's great to identify with your characters, and you make it easy to do so. 5*

I bet you never realized how many engineers read your stories, until you saw our comments.

Hans

Reading my way through all your stories. This is the first one I didn’t enjoy. Probably because the male MC was so clueless. I didn’t rate the story because so many have been great I couldn’t stand to give less than a 4. On to the next. JB