All Comments on 'The Invisible (Young) Man'
by Charles Petersunn
- 12 Comments
Anonymousover 15 years agoIt takes a lot of concentrated effort to put most boy's fanciful dreams in to words but this story surely does it
ChucksSiteabout 14 years agoand have enjoyed all of them, except several were not as erotic as earlier ones. This one, however, depicted every boy's (man's) dream, and more. It kept the erection hard; it prompted more visual and mental images of pleasure. Yes, it was good! As in all of Charles' stories, the detail was fantastic - one feels a part of the story. And as all of them end with a climax, they always leave one yearning for more. The possibilities are endless, so Charles, we're waiting!
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Firmhands5about 13 years agoJust a great fantasy of men - when will you write more? Let me know when more is written!
Hestomialmost 13 years agoThis was an excellent story, very well depicting the main character, as well as the fantasies of those around him. Your detail in how easily people will ignore the supernatural was also well done, and I hope we can see a second chapter to this story sometime soon.
Anonymousover 12 years agoMake more of this invisibility genre and mabye if you would be so kind as to make a story of a boy who suddenly gained the ability to control and be a master of TIME just like that movie" click" with adam sandlar or someone i cant remember
rackerson3almost 12 years agoThis story has a great premise, and I loved the possibilities almost as much as your writing. The only complaint I have is that this story feels unfinished. It has been around a year since you've submitted anything, so I'm not sure if you're still active or not, but this would be a great way to continue.
