All Comments on 'The Island Ch. 03'

Well... did anyone else tear-up at the end? I did and I wrote it... I'm just an old softy xxx Michele

Another great Michelle story. Interesting ending. However, what happened to John and Steve. Just a little gap there. Still great though.

No gap. They lived happy ever after on the island until they died, do the math. Bobbie arrived on Mirrocau in 1950, their grave was discovered in 2010. Both couples had at least sixty years together. How they died (old age I'm guessing) and who buried them together is best left to the reader's imagination. Sometimes the author has to allow the reader to fill in the blanks. Thanks for reading my story xxx Michele

Yes Michelle. You did make me cry. I LOVED IT. You really have a way of pulling me into the story.

Miss Kira Bangkok

My cheeks are wet with emotion! Absolutely loved this story!

Very nice story Michele, thank you.

What a beautiful love story! There are not many love stories here, especially not on this emotional level. Lust disguised as love there are many.

Keep up the good work and thanks :)

You should be getting these to a lawyer & a scriptwriter-Grace Leannan xo

I love this story as much as the other story about the Leavenworth soldiers, that refers to this story. Just the right amount of "Will they or won't they?" Thank you for such great writing!