All Comments on 'The Job Ch. 02'

continue the amazing story

Keep writing!

Longer is better. Give your tale more girth.

Didn't take her long to renege on her promise of not to attack him! I think I love her, hehee. Fantastic fantasy. Looking forward to the next chapter.

There is a difference in pronunciation of words based on spelling. Clothes has an "e" after the "h" to create the long "o" vowel sound. Your use of "cloths" has the short "o" vowel sound (and rhymes with "sloths"). Also, the singular spelling for "panty" is "y" not "ie". I might have overlooked these, but you are a pretty decent writer, and I thought you might like some advice so as to not rely only on spell check.

They fall asleep

where does the job take him next? you can't stop npw

Tell the anonymous Spell Check to 'Shut Up'.

A good story. Love between Mother & Son and Grandmother & Son are special.

A similar thing happened between my Mother and I, not her best friend but us. Went on for years even after I married.

Keep writing.

REgards

Time for another story.

It up. They need to keep it going!

Go on...

Hope you keep going it's a good story and well written

Hope you knocked up your mom with kid inside her and not just one.

Needs more to the story!!!

This is a compelling story, well written. There is so much trash in Lit that it is a huge pleasure to read something by a truly competent writer. The only problem (if problem it be) is that I/we need more. The Oliver Twist syndrome, “Please sir, can I have some more?” Worth at least five stars!

Great, hope to read another chapter soon.