All Comments on 'The Job Pt. 05'

Sweet, lovely chapter (especially because Kyle gets his ass kicked). Marissa and the boys find love and a home. You know the boys now have everything in place to grow up to be good men. My only problem with it is.....I get that Doug is horribly shy. I get he has no experience with sex. But to have a boob put in his face and him have no clue what to do with it? Seriously?! Where did this man grow up?! On a deserted island with no human interaction?

A very tender and loving chapter. It's sentimental, but not sappy. Happiness for ordinary nice people. Well done.

I have been loving reading you story This chapter was another great on and has me anxiously looking forward to the next one. Thanks for submitting it.

Ted

I have never read a more beautifully written love story.

that was romantic

well done

All of my favourite stories are written by you, but THIS chapter reached a whole new level. Best 25 minutes of my reading life, better than Wilbur, more good feelings Then of a Dickens. I just dont know what to say :D ty vm from norway

can create characters that LIVE. You craft your stories with love. They are beautiful and terrifying and, ultimately, satisfying.

So glad for Marissa. Now for the others in this little story jewel.

You are such a great story teller. I hope that you are able to keep these wonderful stories coming for us.

Thank you!

Beautiful story, only tainted by Kyle's unwelcome appearance; but then again if not for Kyle and his "unorthodox" methods things wouldn't have gotten better for both Marrissa and Doug. Well put Dreamcloud.

What can I say, love, caring sex, true bonding and commitment. My second time around with this story and its just as good.

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh...........nice story!!!

Lovely storey. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Great story, kudos to the author and double to the editor. It took till mu second marriage to feel anything c lose to this, thanks.........................

A pleasure to read, the descriptions are a delight.